I really like the idea of your story, as someone who truly values my family and people that I care about I would want to write about our journey together in the best way that I can.
Making our dreams come true in writing is definitely something that I wish to do in real life as well. I appreciate you writing the theme of working towards your dreams because that is what is most important. Putting in the time is the only way that you can get there and we have to find a way to keep pushing like you say "no matter what".